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Housing is emotional, political and economically complex. Your challenge is to replace slogans with a clear, balanced and convincing argument.
Mission briefing
Neuro-Tip: Separate observation from explanation. A strong social-issues essay distinguishes what is happening, why it may be happening, what consequences follow and which responses are realistically available.
Vocabulary launchpad
1. Structure Lab
Rebuild the argument. Drag on desktop. On mobile, tap one paragraph and then another to swap them.
2. Writer's Decisions
Choose the version that is more accurate, defensible and appropriate for formal writing.
3. Editing Room
Due to rents are extremely expensive, a lot of young people cannot emancipate and they stay in their parents house until their thirties.
Why? Due to is followed by a noun phrase, while because can introduce a clause. In English, emancipate is not the natural verb for simply leaving the family home. The revised version also avoids unsupported absolutes and uses more natural formal vocabulary.
4. Argument Map
Build causality before adding impressive vocabulary.
Define the pressure
Explain several causes
Show consequences
Evaluate responses
Reach a nuanced judgement
5. Your Writing
Write 160-190 words. Include at least two possible causes, one social consequence, two policy options, one limitation or counterargument and your own reasoned conclusion.
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